Wow, vaia! This is friggin' cool! Is the red mage off Final fantasy? Heh. And, I can see where wolfen is talking about, you can see alot of here, but maybe having more of a sideview or something and the spell going more ahead of her? Awesome none the less, great effects on the magic.
Can you put that effect, in its exact same position, over a black background? Then bring it to photoshop as a png, invert the colour, used "mac's remove white" in photoshop, invert it back, take the image of her without the effect (again as a png, or a jpg will work if yu can't do that), put the effect over her as a layer in photoshop, then adjust the transparency. If you don't have remove white, I can send it to you.
I just haven't gotten off my arse to upload it again
other than that, its an awesome piece!
Thanks!